Really nice.
Beautifully written, and full of emotion.
Well done !!
xxx cici xxx

Pretty good job, try to keep a constant flow. Keep it up

Wow! very very good, and so true.

It's sad they way all you gotta do is put on a fony smile and makeup then everyone thinks your okay..its amazing how people can completly miss the true pain..i know it bothers me and the onlky person that can see through it is my best friend..anyways beautifly written

Good write. I see you put a lot of emotion into this. You tried to get a lot of detail in there about the emotion and feelings. Although in some places, it seemed you repeated yourself, this was unnecessarily dragging the poem on. Good idea of make up covering the person as a mask, not just to look presentable.

Thanks for commenting on my poem “Not So Level Ground.” However, I have to disagree with your comment. I actually spelt honour correctly as I’m from England.

Good work, keep writing.

Nicely done and said, the flow is sorta on and off but it still a good poem. Great job. ^_^x sorry it took me awhile to read and review.

Yeah definatly going on my favorites list this is great the first stanza flowed weird but the rest was amazing

Conceal all the mistakes,
With this mask I continue to portray,
Wipe away all the tears,
Because they will not take the pain away

that was my favorite

the only other thing is that the theme of this poem was hising sadness with makeup and i think thats a VERY interesting concept very neat idea but you got off topic the last 5 stanzas i think your should have stuck with the makeup thing trhoughout the whole poem cause i really am excited by the idea but 5/5 anyhow great job

So sad - I thought the flow was great, sometimes the rhyming seemed a little forced - but it's rare to see a poem without forced rhymes . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Wow this poem is such a good poem. I really like it. powerful...!
you sure can write. I really like the second last verse, it really stood out to me.

This is a good poem...very powerful....keep writting and have fun...please comment and rate my poems..thanks~DARK~

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