First time, it was excellent rather. I didn't like the topic though, it's just not my type...yet I still enjoyed reading it. Good job on rhyming the three stanzas.

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Very good one also you wrote it very good

Very good i loved the flow again i had my fav. stanza's...and those are the 3rd and 4th....those were very good...but in the second stanza, the very first line...i think you should word that differently...im not quite sure how but it kinda didnt fit all that well...5/5

Wow, your such a great writer. you obviously have strong feelings about things.... *adds to favorite authors list*

Pretty good Keep it up
Becky
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