by shawn hoskins Sep 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Young girl why would you want to kill yourself, i don't understand, killing yourself solves nothing all it does is keep people that care about you suffering, i don't see what made you want to give up so easily,you hide in your shell when you use to be so strong when did things go wrong, it tears me apart to see you so blue, just tell me if theres anything i can say to help you through, my love for you runs so true,if you was to leave this world you might as well kill me too cause living my life without you is something i could never do. |
by Jamie
I love your work, i really do, i enjoy reading it, it's not like a chore to comment back on your poems. hehe your so going on my favorites list!!! i really love your work this was great you seem like youd be a good rapper lol |
by Katlynn
Awwww this is so sweet and kinda sad how she wants to die. I mean i feel like that right now you have no idea. But anyway besides me. You did an amazing job again. I love your work like i told you lots of other times. But anyway your very talented. And i really enjoyed this poem. I think who ever loved someone so much would actually die with them or keep them alive. Amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |