Awwww this is so sweet and kinda sad how she wants to die. I mean i feel like that right now you have no idea. But anyway besides me. You did an amazing job again. I love your work like i told you lots of other times. But anyway your very talented. And i really enjoyed this poem. I think who ever loved someone so much would actually die with them or keep them alive. Amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I love your work, i really do, i enjoy reading it, it's not like a chore to comment back on your poems. hehe your so going on my favorites list!!! i really love your work this was great you seem like youd be a good rapper lol

5/5