Nice, I liked the way it sounded. And you managed to portray the dark side of loneliness very well.
I hope you can read mine, A House By the Sea, for what I hoped to describe as the nicer, more becoming side of loneliness, and if you like dark, a little bit twisted poetry you could take a look at Nighttime Seagull.
Just an idea.
lots of luck, elizabeth.

Wher u been? U like disappeared 4 like ages (well it seems like it...) U k? Hopes u good! Great poem luvya

Wher u been? U like disappeared 4 like ages (well it seems like it...) U k? Hopes u good! Great poem luvya