Wow that puts such a freakin scary image in my head...5/5

Wow really good
keep it up
i'm looking forward to more

That was hella tight, i loved it those words will stay with me for a long time, great job. i'll be looking for more of your work.

-darknessdecends

Beautiful poem! Well-written....very descriptive. I like it! 5/5

Seems a little chaotic, then again, it is a dark poem. I like it contentually, very much, it intrigues me.

Brilliant poem. Very good choose of words. Very visual. Thx A LOT for the comment on my poem. Take care.

Love ya, Flo *hugs*

Excellent word choice and great descriptions. The imagery was good and the flow was nice. Cool poem. You did an excellent job.

Everytime I read your poems, my mind goes into an adventure mode.

That was absolutely outstanding!

No complaints whatsoever.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This wonderful it was still choppy in some areas as you other poem was but this was an incredible idea

As my wing shadows the night
hiding away all hope and light
unleashing within chaotic pain
covering the world with it's dark stain

that was such an awesome stanza if i could rate you higher then a 5 i would!!!!

Wow that was so good. You are really talented. Keep it up. *5/5*

Wow your poems are amazing.. do u know that person called ''sparkley eyes'' ??? well she has been leaving really mean comments..lol comment on my poems too

Love the rhyme..
its a very creative poem, i admire that. good job mate
rob