Hey, really good poem, you're so truthful and you put alot of things in perspective. Well done !!
xxx cici xxx

Fantastic. Normally I stay away from sad suicide poems written by young teens, for a fairly obvious reason, but this one I'm glad I read. You've broken the steriotype in my eyes. All the images from the "unread" note to the "suicide carousel" was perfect. You really portrayed great emotion and meaning with this. Well done keep it up, you have talent.

Wow this is really good...so true...5/5

Oh my god this was excellent i totally understand what you mean great work xxx 5/5