Wow, this seemed really deap. I liked this one alot. Your writings are very thorough.. and i like them alot out of the many i read. Great job. Keep it up!

Love Always,
Katie Schettler

I liked this it flowed well and rhymed well i little long for the simple point you were tyring to get across but oh well uhhhh i liked it good job getting out what you feel so well 5/5