I like this poem, it's straight to the point and short and simple but still really good.
xxx cici xxx

Its really good. the thing is i understand it

This, to me, is a good poem. I like it at least.

This was pretty good.. it was a bit too repetitive for my liking but that might be just me.. i liked your descriptions of black and i think i might do a poem like this. :) another thing that i think you can improve is at the end your rhyming just stops. i think you should continue it throughout the poem. nice job 4/5