My Wish

by shadows cloud my ability to love save me   Sep 24, 2005


Have you ever hoped for the right person to come along ?
The one to come and lift you off your feet, the one to bring you roses, and kisses on your cheek?
OH how I would wish for that one thing to appear into my life.........
Angel can you grant me one wish , one wish that will keep my happiness on a forever lasting roll?
How can love be mine , how can I grant people their happiness?
I want to see smiles upon faces, smiles that will shine forever more.
So now I ask can you grant my one wish , a wish that could change the world?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Layla

    THis was an awesome poem
    Liked it alot because I can relate to it
    Hope you get through whatever your going through
    Love ~Layla~

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    One word, hun: AMAZING!!!!!!! Holy wow! Awesome job, Zoraida! It's beautiful!!! My favorite lines were:

    "So now I ask can you grant my one wish , a wish that could change the world? "

    GREAT ending!!!!!!!!! Wow! Breath-taking, hun, really.
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Miss Darcy![xXkestrelXx]

    Wow dat poem waz really beautiful!!! it waz soooo heart-touchin!!! wow keep up da goot work!! :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    We all feel that way, Im sure. all looking for the perfect person, a companion throughout life

  • 19 years ago

    by Silver Wings

    I likie it's good

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