Well you changed the world for my Zoraida. so thanks.

I likie it's good

We all feel that way, Im sure. all looking for the perfect person, a companion throughout life

Wow dat poem waz really beautiful!!! it waz soooo heart-touchin!!! wow keep up da goot work!! :D

One word, hun: AMAZING!!!!!!! Holy wow! Awesome job, Zoraida! It's beautiful!!! My favorite lines were:

"So now I ask can you grant my one wish , a wish that could change the world? "

GREAT ending!!!!!!!!! Wow! Breath-taking, hun, really.
Love always,
~BJ~

THis was an awesome poem
Liked it alot because I can relate to it
Hope you get through whatever your going through
Love ~Layla~