I'm Very Impressed, Fluid Flow, Talanted Word Ussage...Great Imagery That Caught My Eye...And Captured My Heart...Perfection Shined Through This Poem 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great poem, i really liked it. it had a nice flow too 5/5 you have talent, keep it up! and thanks for commenting me

Another great piece I can really relate to.The losing things part and insomnia reference hit home.The rhyme scheme works very well.

A great piece of work Holly, I have calloborated on a few poems and it really gets the juices flowing. Fantastic work, I can`t wait to see more. Love, Tim

I even callaborated on some poems too..lol.

A well-written poem, very descriptive. Long poems have to be very good to keep me reading to the end and this certainly did.

Holly.....
What an awesome collab you two put together ..
Two beautiful minds put together to create a masterpice of emotion ...It captured my attention and held it from beginning to end ...
I'm off to give your partener my comment ..
Take care Holly always a pleasure to read one of your new poems..

Holly, haven't read anything of yours in a while and it's wonderfully refreshing. I love this meter for you it really shows off your comfort with words. Great piece. You toy with words so well..heh..
i'll be back to read more ;)
roseoxo

Thank you for your kind words. i really liked this one. deep and dark.

An awsome dark poem i loved it!

Woh! Really awesome poem! I can totally relate to. Love your style! 5/5
keep it up! ^_^

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.