I like the poem. But you could try and capitalize all your I's And make sure you spell stripped correctly.

Thank you.

So far your best. keep it up. Check out my love poem

Hey
great job! i like it... its kidna short, but its good... im ussually one for the longer poems, but this is great. thanks for the comment on mine!
hannah

This poem's really touching and beautifully written. Another great poem xxx