by Bradley Peter Sep 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
You were taken by the sea |
I got a little teary eyed. But it was amazing. |
by Lucifer
I just hope this poem is not about the girl you mentioned in most of your poems. |
No, no, not to fear, tis complete fiction, sir. |
by Raven
This poem somewhat portrays what most of my dreams are... The "one" man in my life saving, usually I'm saved....but few times I wasn't..... Love the poem though, I love reading your work.... Mine sucks i know, but sometimes i have my moments. |
by Vanessa
Deeply moving peiece, I am honest as well I love how you keep the i's lower case it really adds to the poem, I like the second staza the best it has almost a muscail quailty to it. The flow is great, the emotion strong, you couldn't have done much to improve this peice, it is wonderfully written 5/5 |
by Ike Dizzle
Dang this is so sad. It's amazing how you put urself in the spot of someone else and write as if it was your own situation. Awesome job. |