Untouched love

by LadyPearl   Sep 25, 2005


Steady as my heart still flies
our love abound remains divine
souls in love, eternal ties
knowing you will always be mine

In my heart I fill with desires
untouched by silent wavering ages
burning deep within love's fire
Strength and trust alone still rages

Wind blows and dust scatter
rain strikes in thundering sounds
But our eternal love will not shatter
In your warm arms this love still abounds

Gentle touch a tender kiss
Something I would surely miss
Our love survived through time's distress
true love survive nonetheless

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cristela Quiroz

    Thanx for the comment and suggestion. i thought some might be too long. i like your poems, i really like this one tho. I belive true love really does survive no matter what, other wise.. its not true love

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    AMAZING

    keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

    laura

  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    Awwww.......this is so sweet! I like your style of writting! Yeah my fav. stanza would have to be the last one!!!!!! You're such a great writer! Take care!
    ~*~Cindy~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    You kind of put your finger on it about my poem..very complicated...but this the poem at hand is just lush....you take me to the heavens above and your words...tie my down to the most inimate of emotions...you well and truly are untouchable...good stuff...

    [lostlaureate- come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Your poem is beautiful Noni!
    Hey, you should read some of mine.
    I give you a 5/5! **************
    Cul8r

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