I love it, it's really original and beautiful. Keep writing.

XoXo
G.a.B.y.

Hey thanx 4 commenting my poem. u rock huni this is such a truely touching poem i love it but i loved the last 4 lines the most. ur a great poet n u used great since of word use. keep it up 5/5

Wow this is great. I love the last line. great writer

Awsome poem

Wow, I'm speechless. I love love, and I Love the poetry that comes out of it. I have been trying my hardest to make one just as amazing as this one, but man its hard lol. That was incredible! I don't think you can make it any better than it already is. Amazing job!

Beautiful poem. I thought you did a wonderful job. It had so much feeling in it.

Beautiful poem. I thought you did a wonderful job. It had so much feeling in it.

Its very touching, do you have other ones? comment on mine and let me know. it's called you dont know, its realated to this boy that i really like

You might want to read it over another time....but it flowed nicely...some of the rymns seemed force but the ending once again did a good job at summing it up

~Retniapdoolb~

Your poem is beautiful Noni!
Hey, you should read some of mine.
I give you a 5/5! **************
Cul8r

You kind of put your finger on it about my poem..very complicated...but this the poem at hand is just lush....you take me to the heavens above and your words...tie my down to the most inimate of emotions...you well and truly are untouchable...good stuff...

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Awwww.......this is so sweet! I like your style of writting! Yeah my fav. stanza would have to be the last one!!!!!! You're such a great writer! Take care!
~*~Cindy~*~

AMAZING

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

Thanx for the comment and suggestion. i thought some might be too long. i like your poems, i really like this one tho. I belive true love really does survive no matter what, other wise.. its not true love