Broken Promise

by M MEM   Sep 25, 2005


There is a promise,
I made to someone,
Back in may.
I said I'd never feel like that again,
I said I'd never do that again,
Well,
This time I really broke it,
Worse than before.
Please forgive me,
I can't keep promises,
I just can't.
This was too hard to keep,
After everything lately,
Please forgive me,
I am truly sorry.

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this is a personal poem,
it goes out to someone,
she knows who she is,
hopefully.
i only need to tell someone this so i dont care what you say people

im sorry

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  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Heartfelt poem. I'm glad you have got this message out and in a poetic form too.

  • I like your honesty and the fact that you're brave enough to say sorry.

    I like this, you've put more emotion in it, rather than trying to make it sound like typical poem.

    xxx cici xxx