How the story goes ..Great poem

by jazmine   Sep 25, 2005


So you know how the story goes ....Ugly girl gets picked on by pretty girl then kills herself.
Well.........This is a different story about the pretty girl who picked on the ugly one.

She hates life.... more than anyone could imagine...... She hates the fact that she can be so cruel to someone
and then still have people like her because of how she looks
Her teacher let her pass an exam which she failed because she was a cheerleader.
Her parents buy her whatever she wants, she earns nothing buy herself.
So one night she went for a bath..... She mutilated herself so badly that her parents couldn\'t even identify her face ..........she though \' if I was still ugly would people still come to my funeral\' and then sliced her face up ........
Tell me honestly what you think bad or good no offence will be taken. I need constructive criticism

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~*CuT*mY*wRiSt*~

    It waz good i like it alot

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    The concept of the story is fine. Infact it is oddly true. I to think you could expand and explain the situation a bit more but as i said the concept of the write was good.
    - The moral of the story being, people will do anything to be accepted or feel truly loved.

    Well done,
    - Kal.

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