Comments : And Tomorrow

  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Amazing! You wrote this poem so beautifully. I love how you kept such a steady rythem and yet were able to use such sharp and glossy words. I especially liked the sentence: 'Tomorrow I wake with a second wind'.
    Very expressive, it shows hope, strength and faith. Very well done. 5/5. Keep writing, you have talent!

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)