Ur poem is really good and i like the fact that its related to a real life situation...keep it up

Thats an awesoem poem i hope your parents stay together

This is excellent! I loved this... I'm really sorry to hear about your parents...And it was good of you to remind them about the good and bad times. You should show this to them if you haven't already.

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