Hey Jammal I liked your poem!! It could use better structure!! I loved it!!! you should read and comment some of my poems and i will do the same for you!!
Love Joclyn : )

Why do you made yourself the promise...any girl who has a guy like you is so lucky...trust me...really sweet...

Very good....but dont stop yourself from falling in love it can be a beautiful thing...-xxx-

5/5 really good job. its kinda reminds me of my feeling i have pushed to the bak of my mind! lol neway nuff luv xxx

That was so sweet and amazing. great job!

I really like this poem, it really makes me think. thanx for the comment..

Very sweet and emotional... you have a talent that is waiting to burst out into the world... keep up the good work and make your mark... thanx for the comment ;)

It is very nice poem but u shouldnt made this promise dear we are human beings and we need love in our life some day u will understand...

God bless u

Look i am 13 year old boy and i really liked u poem keep the good job going

peace the king

Look i am 13 year old boy and i really liked u poem keep the good job going

peace the king