by juss an allycat Sep 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I look around, where I am |
This is a really good peice, expressive and with a great flow. the content is very good too. |
A very well written dark poem |
by The Wingless
Wowie, it's great but it so sad. |
by Ariana
Really nice work. Imagery works well and your rhythm and flow is accurate. |
Hey i saw that your a kiwi so i thought i'd check out your stuff, great poem, i really enjoyed it. luv courtie |