by Drew Gold Sep 25, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The fire that she danced about |
Sexily beautiful, wonderful imagery :) |
by Lenny
Wow that was brilliant as always, i think this new point of view, its simplicity, and the story it tells combines to make it a really fine piece. Geez your getting alot of comments and votes these days aye. I can see why though. |
This is a really descriptive poem, i loved it! it was really beautiful... |
by N J Thornton
A beautifully described scene though out the poem. The images you conveyed were detailed enough to bring the poem to life. My favourite couple of lines were “her hips switched and shifted - |
by Angie
Very magical and mystical and so unique. I enjoyed reading this one, I was able to visualize it all. You painted quite a picture..... |