Overall, this is very intriguing. The dark undertone's add to this very element.
I also enjoyed the reference to crayon's. It painted an interesting picture. Well done~Holly

Just...wow...
This here's proof of why I'm your fangirl. And I really HAVE run out of ways in which to praise you! When the people in charge of making up words create a word that describes your abundant talent, I'll be sure to use it. Until then, I can do naught but clap, cheer and throw roses. Wonderful work from you, as usual. 5/5