by shawn hoskins Sep 25, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Theres something wrong with my mind, shadows follow, voices call, i don't know who to listen to at all, i find myself slipping from reality, voices fill my head with murderous thoughts, i try to ignore them but they are beginning to get to me, i see haunting figures dancing around pointing there skeletal fingers toward a dresser drawer, i open it up and there's a gun i pick it up, as dark figure say's," follow me," he leads me to a bedroom door i open it up, theres a stranger sound asleep, a deep dark voice says, "do as you're told or your soul will be mine to keep," my hand is shaken, the gun rattles in my hand as i point it at the stranger a loud voice say's, "now do as you were told,"my hand quivers as i pull the hammer back, i shoot one shot straight to the head, blood goes everywhere all over the sheets and on the bed, this is the tenth time the demons have come to me and every time someone ends up dead,a serial killer you could call me, but i just listen to the voices in my head. |
I loved that! You are AWSOME! |
Woah.....woah! this is really dark haha (duh) i liked it it was freaky! 5/5 |
by LadyPearl
Good job, THough I prefer if you would make stanzas. It would be easier to read. Keep it up |
Hell, thats um.... deep... but personally i found it quite enthralling, i like the idea that a person can be controlled by something so uncertain. Really nice piece, keep it up. |