Wow.. that was really strong and violent.. and well written, too : ) Very very nice job, 5/5 from me.
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Wow that is great, i think that's my fave of yours, it's really ragey and just plain amazing really, luveth u x

A great poem, expressing the emotion of anger really well!luv u xxxxx

KATIE WE ARE GONNA DO RANTY COMMENTS ON EVERY ONE OF YOUR POEMS TOO SO YOU GET A BLUE C AS WELL AND COS WE LOVE YOOOOOU XXXXXX