I love ur poem its gr8! gd wrk!

*Michelle*

Thats a brilliant poem, and I really agree with what you have written at the end, it is totally true noone should ever give up.

Wow...really great poem 5/5, it's well written and straight to the point! Like it because it's really honest! Great job ^_^

"For many out there will help you,
If happiness is what you see"

"Because many are willing and ready,
If only you'd see them there."

love those lines! those are important for someone to understand in times of rough and tough. love them! because it is so truemore people care about you and want you to suceed then you really know. you have a great message here. i just love it! another poem extremely well done with such powerful force in such a creative way! well done and i hope things are getting better for you hun . i'm always here

~lots of hugs and love

~Jacklyn

So very true. i hope that i do have that willpower. i'm not one to give up easily. i'm glad you arent either.
much love,
-A

Wonderful write, awesome work. It's nice to see something so inspiring.
I especially liked this part:

"If you don't have the strength,
To stop feeling the way you do,
Then there's only one person to blame,
And that person - Is you."

Very true, loved it.

Hey, Kal!

I see you've changed your screen name. I love it. =)

Here's the stanza i loved the most:

"*Take a little walk alone,
Breathe in the icy air,
Cleanse those few impurities,
That send you into despair.*"

It gave me a clear image of myself walking down the street, just needing to cool down from something going wrong. It's almost like i could feel part of the up-coming October air sinking into my face. Maybe taking a walk is what i need to do to let go of the negativity around me. It could do me some good. :) The sensory details included in this poem were wonderful. They made my imagination alive.

Here's the other stanza i like:

"*All you have to do, Darling,
Is hold on like you've never before,
Take the rope from around your neck,
And use it to get off the floor.*"

It gives off a positive sense of life. Don't hurt yourself that way, but help yourself recover from it so you won't have to think about it anymore, and so you'll feel better than you were.

You never cease to amaze me, Kalah. Always keep your talent, and never lose your sense of style of words and emotion.

Love Always,

//Ari\\

I Liked The Format Of The Poem And The Way You Flowed In Depth With Creativity, Your Word Ussage Was Very Impressive...Well Actually Theres No Part In This Poem I Wasn't Impressed By 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This is absolutely true...so many times I've thought of giving up... reading poems like this make me strive harder again.

touching and emotional piece. thank you so much for writing this...take care

I love this poem. Keep up the good work and dont give up no matter what you do. Good luck!

AwEsOmE JoB GiRl !! I LOVED IT !!

That was brilliant and it's so true. Copping out is for cowards. Congrats on the poem, it's a good one. xxx

Hey. I was hoping someone would make a poem with this message. Giving up is not the answer, and being able to put it into a poem like that was quite impressive. I admire your work, and have no complaints as to anything you write really. I hope you keep writing and don't change a thing about it.

Very inspiring. I hope more on the site will read and take your words to heart.

OMG!! I absolutely loved this poem. A dear close friend of mine, Kody, killed himself and It broke me and the rest of his friends in half.. THERES ALWAYS ANOTHER WAY and I love how you so much showed that thru your words.. It was superb! and I am amazed at the talent!! 5/5 Def.!! U ROCK!! It really did touch me! GR8 READ!