Great poem 5/5 I just love it...I know its sad but it's such a great poem. ^_^ thanks for sharing your poetry with us

Haha this is very good so original...5/5

Simply amazing, your a great poet. keep up the awesome work. voting and commenting on my poems would be greatly appreciated. ~Hard2Heal

Great job. you can tell you wrote with emotion. your a talented poet, keep up the awesome work! take care! XXXXX
JL

I hope you are alright love. This was an amazing and well written poem. And I feel sorry for anyone who doesn't feel that way, even if it's you. I hope that someday you can find someone who will prove to you that love isn't always a lie. Because it isn't. Don't give up on it, you're only 15, and you have so much heartache you have yet to live through until you finally come to realize who is there for real. You just have to stick it through. Hell, I know how hard that is, but maybe you'll learn something from everything that has hurt and helped you. Hopefully I'll talk to you soon. I love you.

Take Care,
Renee

Great poem...hope you start writing more again.

alwayz,
*ophelia*

That was one of the realest poem ive heard keep it up

Wow!! I can't believe how well I relate to this poem... I think it talks a lot about the feelings of most teens... well if ya get time you should check out one of mine... It's called Life
And I also have a few others

Brittany

It's nice to see something different. I enjoyed reading that. I liked the ending.

Hey girl i like this poem kicks mager ass will anyways like all the others i have read it rocks but hands down this poem is the best i have read so far you should check my poems out there are ony 3 but i think you would like then

loves lots maya

Great poem. Different to anything of the other poems I've read. Original.
Loved it!
Laterz,
Shirlz.

I know the feeling!

Yeah i think it's true...
i cant stand reading all those love poems either, they all some so full of fake emotion and lies
"forever till the end"
hahaha that's such bullsh*t
nice poem

Great poem! i've read thru alot of yours, I can relate a lot!!! you should read thru some of mine...
I love your stuff
samangel

I like it a lot. nice job girl.

Morgan

This was perfect so many people would relate to this i loved it xxx

Good poem. I liked it!

-Taylor

Oh it's soooooo pretty! You're a great writer! ^_^

U really write fantastic, I mean it..;

x

Great poem continyue writin