Shannon,
Great poem...I love your tittle because it relates so much to the poem 5/5 well written and all! ^_^ take care

This poem had a very good flow and was written beautifully. Nice job 5/5

A nice poem..well written..good flow..sweet..and cute..keep it up..keep writing!:)
xx
mezkenzie

*plz comment on mine 2!! thankz

Hey hey! Great poem, it was really sweet. The flow was fairly well done and had depth and meaning. Some of your lines convayed such a powerful message and fit perfectly. I really liked the lines:

"I will always catch you when you begin to fall
And will always stand next to you proud and tall"

That was the most beautiful line ever. Well done. This is a great write! Keep it up! 5/5 =D
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo