by skyfox Sep 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
It never ends. It just goes on and on |
This was an absolutely amazing write. I had to stop for moments to clear the tears. Beautiful. |
That is so sad but i rly like it please read more of my poems....and coudl you read some of the ones I mention? Sw33t Misery. Beautiful Addiction, YOur Beauty, Home, My Prayer to YOu, Never Let you go, Fade INto you and others...i will tryu and read all your eventually. keep up the good work. xxLISSA |
by Ariana
I read your profile, I can definately read the emotion in here. While this is not rigidly poetic it is definately heartfelt. You also don't sound like you are pitying yourself - rather you are just stating how it is. I could really sense your feelings in this one, nice job. |
by Katt
That's so sad! But I'm sure you'll get through this tough time because you sound like a strong person. :) |
by Stabbylou
Oh my god, I am stunned by this, seriously. It's unbelieveably powerful and moving. I'm so sorry for your losses. |