Hey, well written, full of emotion, well done

xxxcici xxx

Oh my god!!! this was excellent !! so sad aswell i truely hope that you are okay and im very sorry to hear about the things you have gone through take care xxxx

Wow... amazing. so much emotion!! im really sorry they're both not here with you, but remember that they're watching over you, your angels. take care and stay strong.
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Thank you for your comment and i am so sorry for your loss.... this poem is great.... very well written i do not have much time at the moment so i will add you to my favourites and reed some more of your poems later

I loved it. Thanks for sharing. I can feel your pain.

OMG.. that just got me in tears.. im so sorry bout wat happened to you.. i noe im a LIIIL too young 4 u, but i noe in touch times each and every one of us needs someone to talk to, so im here if u ever need to talk about anything (although its most probable that i'll turn to u wen i need some comfort :D) i reli loved this poem.. its true wat ive always belived: experience, and life, are great poets. ur rhyming was perfect and ur words wer so deep and emotional. ill be bak to read some more, but i gtg now,
ill add u to my favorites to have better access to ur pieces
thnx 4 sharing
thnx 4 ur comment
God bless

A wonderful work of art! truely a beautiful, heartbreaking peice. im so sorry for all your losses. i cant immagine going thru what u have gone thru! thanks for the comment on my poem "i still won"
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Hannah

Only have one word, Amazing.

Thank you for sharing this for everyone to read.

Im very sorry for your loss, I know how it feels, yet its different for everyone.

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Oh my god, I am stunned by this, seriously. It's unbelieveably powerful and moving. I'm so sorry for your losses.

That's so sad! But I'm sure you'll get through this tough time because you sound like a strong person. :)

I read your profile, I can definately read the emotion in here. While this is not rigidly poetic it is definately heartfelt. You also don't sound like you are pitying yourself - rather you are just stating how it is. I could really sense your feelings in this one, nice job.

That is so sad but i rly like it please read more of my poems....and coudl you read some of the ones I mention? Sw33t Misery. Beautiful Addiction, YOur Beauty, Home, My Prayer to YOu, Never Let you go, Fade INto you and others...i will tryu and read all your eventually. keep up the good work. xxLISSA

This was an absolutely amazing write. I had to stop for moments to clear the tears. Beautiful.
Kay