Wonderful work I really love this one

Wow, this is an amazing poem! you are definatly on my favorites list, you have such amazing writing talent and i really appreciate your work! 5/5 nice work. voting and commenting on my poems is very much appreciated. ~Hard2Heal

Wow..this was excellent. Definatly a 5/5. Grr..I wish I could say more but i find it complicated. Heh..you've got some talent though.

AWESOME poem!!!

Its so beautiful, i love it, thanks!

You are a wonderfull writer laura...you really do have talent...no one never really knows what there good at at a young age...but i think you have found what your good at...keep up the great writing..your deff on my favorite's!!!!! xoxo nelle

I love it, perfectly written. amazing.

heidi

This poem is just terrible, please stop using typical rhyming words. you are a pathetic poet.
and you're very judgmental

Thats really good!!! it goes very well... Blizzard had no right to say anything bad about your poems... theyre great..
Love Always Tiffany Heather

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Omg I love your poems!!!!
Didn't you use to have blonde hair, like a long time ago. cuz you are on my favorites list. and i thought it was you. But who knows. anyhow. great poems. love them all

Laura you heap of sh!t. :] read it. read it NOW x

So is this about a spacific song? anyway, keep up the work love.

Ahaa 2damax! k?k. is blatantly good. :]x

This was a very good poem. Ian told me to read your work, because it was very good. He told me to start off with this one and then Bang Bang. Um, I am yet to find that. Nicely done.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4.9/5

Wow, this is absolutely amazing. Incredible write, what more can I say. Keep it up!

Very well penned, good flow and imagery. Excellent job. Definetly a 5/5 from me. I loved it!

I cnt c y u hv diz wun featurd cuz it ent dat gud but ye.

Wow this poem was quite simply amazing. I really enjoyed it. You really held the readers attention as they read on. I really liked the way you ended it,

"All is quiet, but you still hear,
That same perfect song,
Now everyone will let you down,
But the lullaby plays on."

I just thought this concluded the poem brilliantly. The flow was great and the hryme pattern worked and didnt seem forced. The vocabulary was great, it created nice imagery. A very enjoyablke read, thank you for your comments! xx

Wow, this is good. i like the emotions here. well written too. your pjcture is very nice too. {:
-Tom