Katie

you are very creative in a sense, but your spelling is off. I feel like you could be a better poet if you used better spelling and used appropriate words for your feelings. Try to extend your vocabulary and you sure will be a better writer. I'am not trying to down you in any way but just give you constuctive criticism. and if you want to read my poems and do the same you can! thanks!

O0o that's sad and deep! ouch! amandax33