This poem was very good. Nice flow and the rhyme was excellent. In the 1st stanza tomorrow was spelled wrong. 3rd stanza the I needs capitalized. Other than that it was excellent.

This is good, everything you write is so deep

This poem is very well written, but i think there could hav been more to it

Wonderful job

Okay i couldnt really grasp the idea of this poem i read through this several times and i understood up until the last two stanzas but that dosnt matter because as long as you know what it means its okay soooo other then that great poem you were off once on your rhyming "Greif and loss of which I have plenty,
In this mist sences are airy."
unless im off on my pronoucing but i dont think those two rhyme

They constantly remind of all my past.
When I felt like such an outcast

i dont know exactly why but this stanza didnt seem to flow at all i think its cause the second line has not enough syllables i dont know good job though

4/5

Very nice thanks for inviting me to read it just blown away thanks 5 for you
Dave