This was very cute.. i liked it ^_^

"You are my lucky star
The one I wish upon
Hopefully you'll make all my wishes come true"

thats my favorite part, well done :)

Aw how sweet....lucky person....5/5

Wow...your poems are all so good i wish i could write like you! 5/5 Loved it.
Becky
xoxo

Beautyful poem! you did an awesome job showing your feelings. keep it up!
crystal

I like this poem! 5/5 and thanx 4 the comments on my poems!!!
keep writing!

Wow very nice poem! Written with much talent.

Brooke

thanks for the comment on my poem~

Your work is soo good! i love all of it, keep on writing, never stop! I love your work and i imagine a lot of other people do too! hope to see some new ones soon! keep it upp..

*Heidi

~*Aww that was supppa sweet 5++ great work*~ XoXo

That is so cute your realy now how to show your feelings gdjob keep it up xxxliltxxx

Lovely poem. Though,alot of your poetry are pretty short and could be longer. 5/5

Hiya thanks for voting! Urs is better than mine! xxx

This is really sweet...5/5

Awww this is so sweet your very talented i think your great and im excited to read more i loved the message this got through this was really good 5/5

Good job, you can still improve the flow

Its short and sweet, ^_^

Awwwwwww. That's so sweet. I feel that way towards my boyfriend. Keep up the work. I love your poems.
*skips off to read more*

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Hehe, I am commenting again. =D This poem is so wonderful hun, I love love poems, though I can't write really good ones. Keep up the work.

PS: THANKS for ALL the comments.

Grrr lol j/l i love it i feel the same way abou tsome parts any way your an amazing writer keep up the amazing work .5.5

Pretty good topic, some suggestions though: Try to keep a constant rhyming pattern, you can improve the flow.

It's very nice .. expresses wonder at the begining and lets it all pour out near the end ..