by katie!
Very good poem, I dont think you would steal anything from anyone, I think this poem was so full of emotion, I felt so emotional whilst reading it and normally I have a heart of stone.. So well done to you and keep on writing |
People that steal work from others are pathetic. Though inturn it shows just how jealous they are, because they couldn't produce a poem like yours. Well done on this one, it had this sort of sick sense of reality that i don't think anybody wants to feel. Love your writing hun |
Great poem its really good i love it you can really understand whats going on...i dont think you'd ever take anyone elses work i had that happen to me just yesterday i posted a poem for my cousin in Iraq someone took it said i took it from them i know for a fact i didnt...but keep up the great writing... |
by SPC Ecklund
Your poems is really awesome keep up the good work! |
Wow wonderful poem, and good idea to stick up for yourself hunni..your a legend and i love you and ya work..well done bub |
Great job... thats sad that someone would steal a poem like that... ugh.... anyways... keep up your great work.. |
Very amazing poem! Flowed great..loved it! |
by Torn
Awesome poem..really that was great. |
by ASPHYXIATED
This poem is great! |
by Kirsty
I loved it so much i'm lost for words |
by Truest Lies
Quite graphic in the descriptions, it sounded very dark, like she was covered in blood, and just kept cutting until she died. I thought ppl cut so that they could feel the pain, and why do it if they never felt a thing. Still, very deep. |
WoW! That was really good and I can totally understand! It made so much sense to me! GOOD JOB! 5/5 |
by Atomic
Excellent poem, absoultey outstanding... |
by mihara
Wow...its a great poem..^^ |
by Fallen Angel
This is really depressing but i guess true if you are so unhappy with life and if you aware willing to take all of it away...you probably will have consequences |
by Olivia
Wow that was awesome I am speechelss, and I relate so well....You are amazing keep up the good work! |
I love it. very good job. 5/5. I can relate so much. it reminds me of myself and something i would write. keep it up. |
by pale angel
I love it. it a good stroy and i know that you worte this. i am glade that i am not the only one who writes with tihs much meaning bihind it |
It's so weird how people never notice things like this. You think that when someone cuts that people would see, when someone cries people would know but the world is so flippin' blind sometimes, so blind. I've been that girl, as have many people I've met. It's just wrong. You wrote this poem extremely well. GREAT JOB!!! |
by Stephanie
Wow this is really good!!! I can relate, it seems someone is always there and ready to shove you down and nobody wants to help. Stay strong and if you ever need to talk I'm here!!! :-) |