Love the poem.. this is ur work i can tell.. 5/5

You're right...our poems are sorta similar, i believe that this is your poem! thats one thing i'm worried about...other pplz stealin my poems. oh well!....luv em

Hey there,
Amazing.. My favourite sranza is.. god i just cant choose but this is my fav...
Her glowing smile disappeared
her white skin turned red
she was all messed up
the day they found her dead
beautifully written, with the perfect words.. i have nothing negative to say to this. take care
Monique

I love this poem, I can really relate to it