"wanderer" i loved the idea, very original. i enjoyed reading it :)
u're very talented!
5/5 for sure!
take care.

pili

I Liked It, It Was Creativly Beautiful, I Liked This Stanza The Most "Neither villages, towns, nor cities
satisfy her divided soul
wandering away her life
will eventually take its toll" I Feel That Way Sometimes, I Wonder Through Diffrent Things To Find That 1 Thing That Makes Me Feel Complete *I Loved It* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Thanx pili! :) thanx nikki! :) i think everyone feels like this at some point. appreciate the comments! :) XXXXX
JL

Omg jl! i love this poem! I wish i could be a wanderer and go wherever i wished...but alas, i am a prisoner of life. One day i will be free though. This poem was beautifully written, one of my favorites:) thx for comments on my poems, keep up the good work!
xoxo weeping wolf