Lovely!!! a truly great imaginative and original peice. keep it up :)

sammi x

Okay so I don't think the shortness is the problem here i think the poem is false and the title dosn't fit

Yes my dear,
But love stops for no one,
It sneaks up on you,
And holds you forever

love dosn't always hold you forever love can be one-sided, lost, and in a lot of cases love can be unpleasant and it does stop....

And forever love will stay,
Living fast and strong,
Never letting go,
As it plays their song.

its just not true

as for the writing aspect I thought it was very good so 4/5

Such a good job here i think its perfect no need makeing it longer then what it is

I really liked this poem, yes , it is short, but the length does not matter, its how much meaning u can get into it, and u did just that. its so beautifully written... it reminds me of a long poem i wrote, sort of the same meaning with a slight different perspective, but i just love it.. keep up the good work !

I cannot see nothing wrong with this poem, i thought it wasnt too short, it was really good and you have talent so you can do anything with your beautiful words, keep writing
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"You love loves tender hold"... "loves" needs an apostrophe to be love's.

"Addicted to love's hold"... after using "hold" in the previous stanza, I'd suggest a different word/synonym for this one. Or vice versa.

Last stanza: kind of odd having it rhyme when none of the others do.

It's a very cute poem! And I can relate to it a lot, in my present relationship or lack thereof especially. Great job capturing the emotions.