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by Flying Phoenix Sep 25, 2005 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Numbness creeps Like a shiver through My frozen fingers Shaking With what I let you do Never I should have gone so far I cant control my shaking Because You were my shinning star Shattered into pieces You broke my beautiful dream I cant forget the way You Tore it at the seam My breathing becomes erratic My temperature starts to rise I still feel where you Touched The very thought, cries Yet slowly Ill recover And eventually I will heal Never you will be near Me I'm free from this ordeal
by Bianca
Its excellent, good job!
by Pilar
That's beautiful. loved it. pili
by Strange Angel
Awww. sweet. spelling error tho seem should be seam should it not. forgive me if i'm wrong, i cant spell either...gd poem tho, interesting structure...:D