*Hugs you tightly* This is how everyone needs to be. Including myself. I certainly wish I had the strength to pick myself up and go on, but that's just not me it seems..If you ever need someone to talk to, I ask you to email me. I'd love to be there fo ryou.....Now, I loved this poem. Its so strong and demised...and has a good ryhming sceme going. Great Job...

Love,
DarkSuicide

Well written dark poem

That was good and it had a good flow. I really liked the beginning for some reason. Good work.
~FotF

Very good, strong poem. I love how you wrote it to express everything so clearly and "tough". ;)

Great write. Keep up the strength.

At first I thought it would be some kind of cheesy birthday poem and again, you surprised me. =)

My favourite lines are:

"Time to blow out my candles,
Wishes fill the spaces of my head,
Should I wish for world peace,
or luck in love instead?"

Very nicely done.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This is a wonderful poem, it is well written and it gives hope. congras for beating your depression, some people arent as lucky. StAy StRoNg and 5/5

MuCh LoVe
TiFfAnI