Woah.. u wrote that really well!!! it was sad but i relate!! good write

Aww this is really sadd
but it's awesome
god I wish i could write liek that.
i don't even know 1/2 of the words you do.
keep it up mann

OOoooohhh! Burn! That was a third degree burn!

Seriously, it' a nice poem with so much hatred and emotions unknown to makind!

My favourite lines were:

"And when that time has come
I do hope that I am there.
Just to look you in the eye
And say, "Honestly, I don't care"

I think it would had been better if it said "Honestly, I never care."

But I do have bad choice in poetry after all. I mean, what other sane reason I have for reading your poems? =)

5/5

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(")-(") Arrivederci!