MidMid,

Thank you for you comments on my sonnet, deeply appreciated.

You have asked me to review this write and advised me that the rhyme scheme for this piece was abab cdcd efef gg. The write was fine, however to be frank, it does not conform to the rhyme scheme. As the 1st line of the 1st stanza does not rhyme with the 3rd line of the 1st stanza. Also the 2nd line of the 2nd stanza does not rhyme with the 4th line of the 2nd stanza.

You will therefore have to rework the rhyming to conform with the requirements set forth for the form.

Best regards,

Steve