by Carmen Sep 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Be careful what you say, |
by Ariana
Oo, I liked this, has a really sneaky feel to it. I liked your straightforward approach too, it fits in really well. I think everything fits in well here, overall really neat piece. Oh and BTW your quotes are hilarious, LOL :) |
by Katlynn
This is so cute and so true. amazing job. amazing talent also you have. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
by NannO
Gud poem.. i lykd it until the last line.. i mean, it didnt reli fit in with the content. the words used i mean.. i thot it shud be a lil more lyk, us hud advice them in a better way ( but thats only my opinion) i reli lyk ur topic, and all of wat u sed is true.. careful who u trust |
by Leona
WOW (Excellent) poem 5/5. |
by Britney
Awwl.. this poem is soo true.. you never know who will tell that one little secret. Very nicely done.. i reallie liek the flow. 5/5 |