WOW (Excellent) poem 5/5.
I really like this part..

It starts with a whisper,
A giggle here and there.
You thought you could trust this person,
Later learned it's not fair.
-Leona

Gud poem.. i lykd it until the last line.. i mean, it didnt reli fit in with the content. the words used i mean.. i thot it shud be a lil more lyk, us hud advice them in a better way ( but thats only my opinion) i reli lyk ur topic, and all of wat u sed is true.. careful who u trust
gud job
Nannoush

This is so cute and so true. amazing job. amazing talent also you have. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Oo, I liked this, has a really sneaky feel to it. I liked your straightforward approach too, it fits in really well. I think everything fits in well here, overall really neat piece. Oh and BTW your quotes are hilarious, LOL :)