Awww, babe this is sweet, but why is it in the depression category? It's more love than anything else. I love the flow of the poem, it's flawless. And how you incorporated the stars in there, and the bench and you two holding each other. I could really picture it. Great job love, and I hope you're alright. Did you get my e-mail?

Take Care,
Renee

Painted a picture with words.

Great poem. Loved it. But don't be down for to long.Something will come along and will hopefully make you wish on a star again
HottChic

I love your poem specially the last 2 lines! keep it up! visit my poems sometime if u have time!