Falling apart

by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]   Sep 26, 2005


If you lived in my life
for just one day
you'd no how i feel
and you'd no what they say

if you had to live like this
with tears down you face
people beng mean
things you can't erase

if you had to be me
live in my terrible life
you would no how i feel
you'd always use the knife

i don't no what to do
i cannot just be strong
cause its easier said than done
and its gone on way to long

i hold on with all i can
but all i do is cry
i sit here thinking about my life
and i just want to die!

please don't be so mean
please don't make me sad
i can't hold on much longer
cause i feel so f u k i n g bad!

is pain just a word
or is it stabbing my heart
all i no is it hurts like hell
and i'm falling apart

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  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Aw thats a real sad poem, Hope your okay. Try not to let life get you down coz it will get bedda =D
    I wrote the poem just to express how im feelin, Cause i just lost my first baby only 2 weeks ago.
    Well you got some great poems, You an awsum writer, Keep it up!!
    Bec xx

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet surprise

    Wow this one is good too! i hate how ppl think they know how you feel! wen really they dont! well chk out my other poem plz! its not as good but it owuld mean alot! thnx!!

    *KaLiN*

  • 19 years ago

    by dwight

    I liked it alot, nice work
    dwight

  • 19 years ago

    by Caroline

    Amazing poem, well written, thanks for your comment.

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Aww That Was Really Sad Maddy, I Hope Your Ok Hun Because That Poem Was Awesome! I Liked It Alot *Net Hugs* I'm Always Here If You Need Me *With All My Love* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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