by Poplawler Sep 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I never thought this would have happen to me. |
by kida
Its a good poem mabey you should break it up like into verses or watever. good style you can tell that its deep and feel the pain that went into every word. good flow too didn't get lost and have to read parts of it over and over again to understand which is good. |