by A Heart Losing Hope Sep 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I used to believe that I knew what I wanted. |
by Kaitlyn
I love this. you seem to really grasp the concept. and its deep. you have a very nice use of words and it all flows well. beautiful. |
by StarGirl
Beautifully written!!! |
by **Just Her**
I like it... I loved how nothing was complicated, how every line I could actually understand and relate too. very nice work. |
I decided im gunna read n comment n all that jazz 2 all ur poem...i enjoyed this 1....lol:) |
by Jason Meres
You have a grasp of words that is both beautiful and gripping, if you found a form you liked and set these to rhyme, we would be looking at true masterpieces. |