I like your words

Wow man you dont hold back at all do ya .. you wear your heart on your sleave very well writen and such a beautiful piece

Must say, this sounds very much like something you would say to someone during a wedding. =)

Dreaming hard? Kiddning.

I wish you luck with Amanda and your poems aren't that bad.

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Nice
5/5
nice how u brought out the feelings from ur heart
love
amy

Nice, simple, but puts the point across, more of a deep love than a cute one, I hope she loves you back as much.

Good Writing!
beth

Okay i do like all these poems...you are talented i must say...but i also gotta tell you i feel like im reading the same poem over and over, kinda like linkin parks music their kicks ass but their songs all sound the same....i think your great but maybe try writing about something different or maybe just a new format like ababcdcd or something i dunno just thoughts...good job though

You have a grasp of words that is both beautiful and gripping, if you found a form you liked and set these to rhyme, we would be looking at true masterpieces.

I decided im gunna read n comment n all that jazz 2 all ur poem...i enjoyed this 1....lol:)
~*Who Cares?*~

I like it... I loved how nothing was complicated, how every line I could actually understand and relate too. very nice work.

Beautifully written!!!

I love this. you seem to really grasp the concept. and its deep. you have a very nice use of words and it all flows well. beautiful.